In our feedback Ms Moore suggested that we should firstly improve the way we have filmed the ident with the way the camera is positioned and the lighting.
In our powerpoint we should link to our corporate identity more so that more information comes across.
Our powerpoint needs to include a bit more information so people can learn more about our ident.
We should also create more of an intricate image so that we can keep the audience interested.
Ms Moore also said that she liked the way we had used music and that our ident was complete.